A form change poem
(with thanks to David Bouchard, “If You’re Not From the Prairie . . . )
If you’re not from New Hampshire,
You don’t know the mud,
You do not know how big the puddles of mud are.
You can’t know my mud.
You do not know how fun it is
To get your feet stuck in the mud
Or to play in it.
How fun it is after a spring shower,
With your toes in the mud
That sucks up and doesn’t let go of your feet
And goes SMACK when you lift
Your foot out of the mud.
You can’t know how fun it is,
How many things you can do in a puddle!
If you’re not from New Hampshire,
You don’t know my mud.
I love it here!
I loved your poem very much. I’m not terribly fond of mud season, but I do like playing in it when I have boots on. I especially liked how you used onomatopoeia with “SMACK.” I can’t wait to read more of your poems.